<p>These are complicated emotions, which may not be expressed in very few words!</p>
<p>Captivated by you.<br />
I get lost in your summer smile,<br />
and I rest in the autumn leaves of your eyes.</p>
<p>Two similar attempts, both perhaps longer than you wish:</p>
<p>你让我着了迷。<br />
我沦陷在你那如夏日般明媚的笑容中，<br />
我停歇在你那如秋天落叶般温柔的眼眸里。</p>
<p>我被你迷了眼。<br />
你那如夏日般明媚的笑容让我沦陷，<br />
你那如秋天落叶般温柔的眼眸是我停歇的港湾。</p>
<p>Vive l'amour!</p>

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Pedroski
<p>I am a begginer and am trying to write something along the lines of:</p>
<p>Captivated by you.<br />
I get lost in your summer smile,<br />
and I rest in the autumn leaves of your eyes. (I am trying to say that I &quot;rest&quot; my gaze)</p>
<p>I got to this, but it seems more complicated than it needs to be. Can you help me out?<br />
被你迷住了。我迷失在你夏日的微笑里，我停留在你眼中的秋叶里。</p>
<p>Neither chinese or english are my first language.</p>

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2024-11-13T10:02:28.033Z
do you mean "sunny smile'?
Tang Ho
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2024-11-13T13:32:54.897Z
I meant summer, to keep the seasons "theme"
Guilherme Leite
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*醉心于你。那笑靥绚烂如夏花，令人失魂。那双眸澄澈似秋波，引人注目。* A bit more literary, a little less accuracy. Personally replacing autumn leaves by autumn ripple / 秋波, since 秋波 metaphorizes beauty's eye contact / 眼神 in Chinese.
zrsammy
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2024-11-13T16:49:26.177Z
May I ask what nationality are you? Because "lost in your summer smile, and rest in the autumn leaves of your eyes" sound "strange" even in English.
Wayne Cheah
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2024-11-15T11:08:57.870Z
I am a native portuguese speaker
Guilherme Leite
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This seems more complicated than it needs to be
# This seems more complicated than it needs to be

(Asked by: username_0 on 2024-11-13)

I am a begginer and am trying to write something along the lines of:

Captivated by you.  
I get lost in your summer smile,  
and I rest in the autumn leaves of your eyes. (I am trying to say that I "rest" my gaze)

I got to this, but it seems more complicated than it needs to be. Can you help me out?  
被你迷住了。我迷失在你夏日的微笑里，我停留在你眼中的秋叶里。

Neither chinese or english are my first language.

**Tags:** vocabulary
> **Comments:**
> **username_1**: do you mean "sunny smile'?  
> **username_0**: I meant summer, to keep the seasons "theme"  
> **username_2**: *醉心于你。那笑靥绚烂如夏花，令人失魂。那双眸澄澈似秋波，引人注目。* A bit more literary, a little less accuracy. Personally replacing autumn leaves by autumn ripple / 秋波, since 秋波 metaphorizes beauty's eye contact / 眼神 in Chinese.  
> **username_3**: May I ask what nationality are you? Because "lost in your summer smile, and rest in the autumn leaves of your eyes" sound "strange" even in English.  
> **username_0**: I am a native portuguese speaker  

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## 1 answers

### Answer by username_4 on 2024-11-13. Score: 2

These are complicated emotions, which may not be expressed in very few words!

Captivated by you.  
I get lost in your summer smile,  
and I rest in the autumn leaves of your eyes.

Two similar attempts, both perhaps longer than you wish:

你让我着了迷。  
我沦陷在你那如夏日般明媚的笑容中，  
我停歇在你那如秋天落叶般温柔的眼眸里。

我被你迷了眼。  
你那如夏日般明媚的笑容让我沦陷，  
你那如秋天落叶般温柔的眼眸是我停歇的港湾。

Vive l'amour!


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